Captivating Start!

"This story has a very interesting start, and I love how the author incorporated the seven deadly sins (wrath, lust, greed, envy, pride, gluttony, and sloth) into this story letting them be represented by different people. I'm curious to see how the story continues, as I have enjoyed reading about Chiave and her journey. I'm also curious to figure out what happens after Chapter 6, as it left it on a cliffhanger. There were some errors in the text, but it was nothing major that distracted readers from the story. There were some stylistic choices I'd recommend, but other than that, I thought it was great and I can't wait to see what happens as the story continues! :) **Notes for the author in the comments below. Let me know if you have questions."