What is your opinion?
to dreams of dragons
"i cant beleive you did this and i cant beleove that i felt like i was there it was amazing so pls keep making these pls i and more would really want this alot more"
Intriguing beginning
"Not much is handed to the reader in this chapter, but I'm definitely intrigued. The writing was very surreal, and I think that you did a good job setting her dream-like surroundings. I liked the mention of the flower petals tickling her feet. I found it interesting that the girl was almost able to read the dragon's mind. I'm wondering about this special ability and if this is rare in the world she lives in. You have a lot of potential here to go in many different directions. You ended it in such a way that I wanted to know what would happen next. The writing style was clean and evocative. The only thing I would say is that you should cut the rhetorical questions in the first two paragraphs. They seemed unnecessary and a little clunky. All in all, this is a great start, and I'm curious to see where it goes!"
