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Fresh fantasy

"Five chapters at the time of review. I will be reading more in the future. This book has great pacing, in-depth characters I can connect to, raw emotions and interesting lore. There’s a few typos, punctuation and formatting issues, but they’re all minor and easily changed. This is a story worth keeping an eye on. "

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An honest feeling

"I really like the story and I am longing to read the following chapters ,l like the plot but sometimes l get confused especially when l read a dialogue i will recommend this story for my daughter "

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