What is your opinion?
Very Good story, but telling is the problem.
"First of all, I only got to know that the first chapter was not the end of it, after few more character list chapters. But when the story began, boy, it surely felt like going through an epic adventure. Just like the stories i read when I was young. Kings and wizards... I still love King Arthur and the wizard story. I think I'm in love with the novel now. Dear Author, my words were harsh but I do love your story."
I like very much!!!
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Good story so far
"I look forward to reading it more, I think more could have gotten in into but I'm sure you saving it for later."
Good but just some grammar problems.
"I liked the story, looking forward to reading more. It was very different to read the profiles of the characters before you read the story and I wasn't the greatest fan of it. But I like the way that you were just in your fantasy world, that you can make your own rules, that is the best thing of creating your own world, your own kingdom, that you can do whatever you want. Just a few grammar problems but that should be easy to finish. Looking forward to see more from you. :)"
Almost Coronation day!
"My favorite characters throughout the chapters were definitely Yosh and Ethan! Ethan stuck out to me the most because the struggle of wanting to be King but also not wanting it by force (which is kind of hard not to do), unless he finds a loophole. Either way, I'm rooting for Ethan. I love the dialogue between the characters. It's very easy to tell that they are siblings from the way the story is written, well done :D. There were a few words missing and letters left out as I got further through the chapters, you'll find these in my chapters too (so no judgment here).This doesn't take away how well the story is written with some revision and edits. Overall, this story has very good potential and I can't wait for the next chapter. "
Love it
"Love the book it was well written. The chapter 1 was great and allowed me to continue the reading the structure was amazing and the book. Can you give me a review with my book called Rising Winds of Fate "
The twelve royals
"The first chapter is extraordinary and written well . The only criticism I have is a bit of a long wait for each chapter I had to get through to get to the first chapter. I think it was amazing of you to add character inscriptions of their age and what they look like. I feel it could of been just written in one chapter. But that’s not a deal breaker . You are extremely talented and I will be reading more. I also love the cover to your book"
Twelve
"I hope you update soon ! I'm enjoying your book author 🥰 !! ❤️ and ✝️🛐 s for all "
The 12 royals
"I'm already hooked on this 1 EJ.Its always great to find a story that pulls you right in in the 1st chapter and really gets your interest,I've gotten this from all of your stories and can't wait to see you work your magic again on this 1."
pls like my book
"Hi EJ!! nice book, can you like my book , it is called Noah Jackson and the curse of hades "
