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WHAT THE HECK? I'm shocked

"JESUS. I mean I suppose I should have known there would be a sick twist since I've read your stories before but it still took me off guard. Like I really should have known. Unlike with My Sister's Heart, I did not see this coming. I don't know why but I still expected this to be some sort of story about honor and sacrifice. I didn't even consider the possibility of... well...yeah. Yikes. But great job as usual. It's very short and to the point and I was considering the possibility that they'd all die from the radiation whilst needlessly fighting. Man, that's sick though— I wouldn't even want to be in the escape pod with that guy after that. Ruthless and disturbing."

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