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Great story

"I like the way it is written , and it is told in a way that makes it be believable. It actually sounds like some of the bizarre things that really happened to me and some of my family at a weird place where we lived when I was young."

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Might have pooped myself.

"This is strait up madness. As soon as I finished reading I said, "Nope. This is messed up." I have to check my closet every night now! For real. Also, what's with the loud teenager stereotype? HA HA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Gave me a laugh for sure, and then things got creepy real fast! I'd have booked it out of there!"

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