Inkitt
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Bone chilling

"This was so beautifully written. It had me hooked. The last line sent a horrifying chill down my back. The way it is written is with some much passion and even though it is short, it has just the right amount to make you want to run scared."

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Beautifully disturbing.

"I'll admit it took me just a moment to work out that it wasn't the girl speaking. The visuals are very, very good--the smell of blood, the amassed bodies, the assailant's teeth. It all pulls together quite nicely. Terrific dialogue use at the ending. This was a fun little romp."

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Great flash fiction!

"Great use of description. Awesome story for how short it is! The first line was great, when I read it I had to know what the heck it was about. I love the twisted nature of this piece and the humor of how the killer wants to be something so preposterous as a Princess!"

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