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Interesting story 👍

"There are a few grammatical errors. The story is interesting. I hope the characters continue to establish as the story continues."

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The rich bully's possession

"I love this story. Please update soon "

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The rich bully's possession

"I really enjoyed thus book "

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Rich bully

"I like it so far definitely moving fast . Curious to see if they end up together. "

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Very good

"Great plot... Would love to read more."

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Natts

"I love this book you should really keep writing "

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The rich Billy's possession

"I loved this book so far it's an amazing read can't wait for future chapters x "

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Excellent

"Excellent read and writing so far "

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The rich Bullies possession

"So far it’s a very interesting story good storyline and plot. This is the first time on this website. I’m impressed so far."

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Love it

"Good can wait for me"

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Would not pay to read, ok for free.

"Too many mistakes to make it a good read. A bit childish in the style of writing and not really plausible at times. But the plot is intrigueing."

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