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Sad poetic thought

This story contains themes of: cheating, domestic violence, onscreen rape, sexual assault abuse

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Summary

Just a random sad thought that crossed my mind from of my old life

Status
Complete
Chapters
2
Rating
5.0 (2 reviews)
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

I was never yours, you were never mine, but I still fell for you as water droplets fall from the sky.

you came into my life in a December night when my days where dark as the moonless night.

you brightened my days with your beautiful smile and the terrible storm that lived in my heart left with fright.

But good things never last as one day you leaved my side with another love you considered better than mine.

that broke my heart and tortured my mind, but I always knew you were not mine you never lied as you never said I love you back.

still some days I hopped you would change your mind, but it didn’t happen you didn’t come back, my day went on as the wild wind blows through the skies taking me places where I can find peace and love.

Time has passed and I have aged I still remember the day i met your face and the bright light that surged from your frame and the feeling I felt I will never forget.

I was never yours i later knew as I met a man who repired the damaged you left behind he picked up every broken Pices with patient and love and brought light that I thought was gone.

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