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White Submissive

"Amazing great quick read need more"

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White Submissive. The proposal.

"I like the story. Easy for me to identify with Alexia. I like the characters. They seem very real. Look forward to finding the book."

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MUST READ

"This was so good, I just bought the book "

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White and dark desires

"I can't find one dislike this far and look forward to more description and intense imagination."

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White submissive ⚡

"I was hooked from the first chapter. I like how the story is building up and that I can have a view from both main characters. Can't wait to read the rest of the book."

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It's me

"I enjoyed the story because I'm interested in submissions. Alexias attitude of virginity is great. I like the cast of characters also"

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Good read

"Good read. The building sexual tension in each chapter is described close to perfectly. The only thing I'll point out is that some of the grammar is a bit weird (not sure if English is a second language for the author) and some punctuation is probably needed in some places. However these are minor gripes and it doesn't distract too much from enjoying the main story. Good read. Look forward to future parts."

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"A little bit slow in the beginning "

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