What is your opinion?
Appreciation and Commission Request
"Hi! I’m Eloise, a digital artist passionate about visual storytelling. I just read your story and was completely pulled in the emotion, the world, the characters it all played out in my head like a comic. I’d love to collaborate on adapting a scene into a short comic! I focus on expressive characters and impactful layouts, and I think we could create something really special together. I charge reasonably and am happy to share samples of my work if you're curious. No pressure just wanted to say how much I loved your writing and share the idea. Feel free to reach out on Discord: luansousa8287. "
Creative concept
"Hi Author, I have read your poem, and I really liked it. You have defined each character very well, and you have kept your work in such a way that it stands out. You could become an even better writer by continuing in this direction. It would be an honor for me if I could work with you as well. I am a commission artist, and I have worked on a lot of character art and book covers. If you think it's a good fit, I would love to create something for you as well. Discord: lilyjackson0295 Instagram: lily.jackson321 Here is the few socials i mentioned you can be in touch with me in here, if you prefer any other social for chat so kindly let me know. Thank you for the consideration. "
Yes!!!
"Loved the first three chapters of this story and look forward to reading the book"
Protect me
"What a great short story can't believe what dex was about to do what a great twist at the end with grumpy "
Short and sweet
"Not usually my genre but love is love and betrayal is heartbreaking, good work author!"
Loved it
"The only thing more I could have wanted was one more chapter time skipped. But overall a fantastic story, Jaberona has captured the essence of the mc so well. Such a believable character "
Took my heart and I don't want it back!
"Another one of Jaberona's beautiful works! I will do my best to not give any spoilers. This book contains the perfect example of how a person can get obsessed over someone when they are available in the time of need and can shelter the person from harm. The need to satisfy and make them happy can overcome one's senses and that...is always when one starts making mistakes. The beautiful part is that this book contains the true meaning of 'needing to be loved'. The one where you know things are not how you want them to be but are ready to continue to ignore the facts than to accept them because you know it will hurt. You are ready to take that continuous sting instead of ripping the bandage off in one go. 10/10! I definitely recommend it! I can't wait to read more of Jaberona's beautiful work!"
Sick and Twisted little and figuratively
"I really enjoyed this short read. Avery was so love sick that he let Dex lie and manipulate him. How he thought Dex cared for him was beyond me when Avery said him and Liz were dating and sleeping together 🥴. Then to lie to get him to have sex with Carl but make him think it was Grumpy was even more f'd up. Dex and Carl definitely deserved what they got in the end and I'm not at all sad about it. Dex was only looking out for Dex and he had zero intentions of being with Avery. He got a sick joy out of how he treated Avery and it was probably because he knew Avery's past. What a monster. "
Good
"It was a good read, I liked the occasional good moments between him and Greeley however,i wish it was built on more so that he could see him more inhumane before accepting the date. I also liked the unexpected turn of things which kept me truly intrigued, hoever some sections felt a bit rushed especially the ending. Nevertheless, its was a good read."
