Inkitt
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Loved

"Loved the book "

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Love it so far great book

"Love it great book "

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She's my problem

"This was a wonderful and cute story. I so enjoyed reading it."

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grammer problems

"amazing book, i love reading it so far. i get a little confused on the spellings and grammar though. other than the grammar problems it's a great book and i recommend it<3"

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Good book

"It was really good but it was like a puzzle with missing pieces you had to finish sentences,fix the grammar, and some times the sentence wouldn’t make any sense but was still a great book overall."

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Bubble

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She's my problem

"It is so interesting I wish you would write more"

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She's my problem

"Loveeeed it sooo much...amazing story...ty wonderful Author πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–"

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chasing ur love

"love involves fighting and is always a great result after the fight"

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She's my problem

"Wow!! Put a smile on my smile!! Thank you for sharing your story with me "

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My Review

"OMG such a cute story! I love how you added stories of the two main characters parenting and gave 4 love stories in 1 book! It was so good! The characters are written well, the writing style is awesome, and the plot is so good too! I loved reading every single chapter and enjoyed the entire story. I just am very upset about the technical writing skills as there are so many typos and sentences that are written grammatically incorrect. Thanks for sharing the story though, loved it! "

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She’s my Problem

"It was good but hard to read. I think it may have been a language translation. But good plot! "

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"Lots of vocab and grammar mistakes. It s confusing"

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I wanted to love it but couldn't finish it

"I started liking this story, but the grammatical errors and wording got so bad I couldn't enjoy the story at all and had to stop."

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