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My girl

"Janice Chen has to be my favorite author on Inkitt and will be for a long time. The grammar might be wrong sometimes but since English is my first language I know ow what she is trying to say. I love the way she writes the plot of her stories. Get up the good work!"

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She's my girl

"This was such a cute and adorable story. Loved it "

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I love this

"Love the way you tell the story. Best of luck!! 💋"

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She’s My Girl 😃😃

"Lovely long Story! Awesome that they covered everything & that they argued & got back together! Very real story! "

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cuuute

"love them both, so cute"

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Its a good story needs a bit of editing

"Good story needs a bit of editing "

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She’s my girl

"Good story line. Plots not so good but overall I have enjoyed reading "

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Good

"Hope Alex and Evelyn stays together ❤️"

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Grammatical mistakes

"The plot is predictable but the characters are cute. Not sure why a 13 year old is portrayed as a little 5 year old kid It’s an average book But writer has to concentrate more on spellings and grammar"

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Not for me

"In love with your stories but this one was not for me. Evelyn is hard to like and Alex too. She is like a sheep when it comes to him and doesn’t have her own. Voice most of the time. He is just a coward and rude most of the time. Your writing is still amazing. "

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Love after the war.

"Cole is a scumbag trying to force himself on a woman. Thank God Alex came to the rescue before it was too late. "

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