What is your opinion?
Review
"Beautiful story. Just loved it. 💞💞"
My fake girlfriend
"This was an amazing story and I really enjoyed reading it."
Romance novel
"I am loving the story and the writing style. The English is sometimes off but otherwise the characters are spot on. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Great plot and I am enjoying it immensely. Thank you 😊 "
Athena
"Okay so far"
love it
"I lo e the story line "
Gloria
"I love this book so much in general I love all of your books you got it girl keep writing I will support you love this book so much. "
Dlmccoy
"Love this story. I do hope Athena drops Ares sorry ass."
Swooning
"Love it!! Thank you 😊 "
Fake Girlfriend - AWESOMENESS
"Wow … Wow … Loved the whole story even the end! Really wanted a few more chapters about the Happily Ever After 😍🥰"
Fake girlfriend
"I like the story"
Excited
"Excited to read what will happen after their contract ends"
hello
"Your story captured all my attention it took me 1 night to read it i was so attached .... im happy that i give it a tyr cause now i dont regret it :)"
My Review
"Honestly, this story has some potential. The characters are well thought out, but there are WAYYY too many grammatical errors. The character development... 😬 Ares was a likeable character for the most part but then the forced marriage thing and the treating Athena like a prisoner made him a character most readers wouldn't like. It's important for your characters to be liked by the readers in every story because readers should feel connected to the main character(s). As for the ending.... The ending was also not the best., to put it nicely. I can tell it was very rushed. Clara is an irrelevant character for most of the story but then suddenly she gains more importance in the epilogue and magically gets a boyfriend. I also do not like how this story romanticizes forced marriage and toxic/unhealthy marriages. Honestly, this story can be so good if re-written correctly. LOVE the cover though, it's great! Thanks for sharing your story! <333"
