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His biggest fan

"This was a very cute and heartfelt story. Loved it "

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Perfect everything is perfect👏👍 I love her storytelling she is great

"Everything I like or"

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Delorismccoy

"I love your stories. I have read some of twice and some three times. I hope you keep writing. I understand that English is not your first language but as you continue to write, it is getting better. The English language is hard to learn as a second or third language. But please continue to write. Don’t let any language get in your way of writing."

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high school crush

"crushing on someone and ends up in a relationship is cute"

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💕 high school love

"Have have no dislikes of this book because I been glued to it😁 So keep up the good work 🙂"

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His biggest fan

"What i dislike *Although at first the main lead hated Olivia, but he shouldn't treat her like that, scolding her Infront everyone ( I hated Joey at the first) What I like *Those funny dialogues ( had me creaking up) *Loved Joey dialogues (I was just smiling whenever he spoke to Olivia with love and sweetness)"

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His biggest fan

"Unsure if this story has been translated into English after it was written. But I found it quite confusing to read as a lot of sentences didn't make sense. It needs more editing. But I can see great potential ☺️"

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