What is your opinion?
Love this book
"Love this book "
He's my heartbeat
"I really loved the story. It was really enjoyable to read."
Awesome novel the writer is talented, and not too dirty its amazing
"Amazing novel I really liked it. "
Cute story
"Cute story"
'He's my heartbeat'
"What an interesting story 👏 There were some grammatical errors, but overall, the plot is so nicely written.. And it really proved that "Dreams come true." The characters are cool too.. It's a beautiful haters to lovers story..Kudos to the author for writing it nicely and do keep on writing..."
It's very good, easy to read and I like all the characters in this novel. But I hate cristine arogance.
"I like because it's free for reading. I dislike nothing. All is good about this app. I recommend this to my friends. "
Crydel
"The story was great but maybe someone should spell check and rewrite sentences for grammar"
Editing needed. Lots of potential but the grammer is off with the dialogue as well as character development is poor. It's not clear how why or when a new character will be introduced as they suddenly come in with no background and with the dialogue it keeps switch from first person to third person narrative. Also the audience intended seems to be high school. Also it would be good to actually learn why Christian is being mean and or Makin NG remarks when he does not even seem to know her. Is that supposed to be a part of the mystery?
"Unfortunately I would not recommend the book unless the dialogue is refined. We the audience need to be clear which character is talking and which narrative is being used as there seems to be constant changes between first and third person narrative. Additionally I just cannot seem to pinpoint a proper plot as it just seems to be memoirs of a high school crush being treated badly. Plot development is not exciting. I would encourage this writer to try working on these things but not to give up as there is potential"
He's Her Heartbeat
"The story has potential but not well executed. English is absolutely pathetic. It felt as if an illiterate is writing. A single chapter had tons of spelling errors which can be forgiven considering it to typos but grammatical errors? That's Unacceptable. The story needs thorough reviewing and editing. By the time half the chapter is read the tone becomes monotonous. The idea behind the story absolutely amazing just needs to be framed and written properly"
Unrequited love
"Christian was a bit cold and malicious at the beginning but his ice melted and he came to realise that she meant a lot to him. "
