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Can’t wait to see what’s coming!

"The sense of disaster and fear in one of the brothers is really well written. You’re really good at writing insanity in the characters and settings. I just can’t wait to see how the two brothers would do with their newly found powers. And I’m especially curious how you would write a good fight sequence. Keep up the good work!"

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