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When there's hail

"I don't read high school/teen drama books because they bore me. However, this one is the exception. I stumbled upon it by mistake and got hooked from start to finish. The writing was insightful, the characters had depth to them and the plot was relateable (even for a mature reader like moi). The author's writing style and skill turned an ordinary teen story into a pleasurable reading experience for me. I'm now checking out their other books."

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I really enjoyed reading it

"The book is amazing,one of my favourites"

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Amazing

"This was a fantastic story, great characters, and the writer has impeccable skills. Definitely the result of someone who’s been riding for years. I highly recommend this book. It’s fantastic."

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When there's hail

"Aaaaamazing story...thruly masterpiece....loved it soooo much...ty Author, you are extraordinary talented πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–πŸ’–"

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Wonderful Read!

"I can't give this novel high enough recommendations. I almost didn't read it until I read the read other reviews, and I am so glad that I did! To start, every character was well thought out and executed perfectly. Each one was unique, and their personalities never faltered, even during the natural growth and development of the characters. Many times in books, I find that I have to go back and double-check who is speaking to make sure I'm following conversations properly. I didn't have to do this once in this book. The personalities never mixed and stayed on point. Second, the details were exceptional. There wasn't one room, setting, sound, character, etc, that I couldn't visual. The descriptive use of language and how it was compiled in a natural flow was wonderful. If someone struggled with hearing or vision, they would still be able to hear and see what was going on, all while imagining the smells, tastes, and textures. That leads to me the way it was written. The flow, vocabulary, and style were all remarkable and never redundant. It kept me wanting to read, and I even slowed down to make sure I was taking it all in. I have an appreciation for any human who can write like this and rarely repeat words. Grammar and spelling were almost perfect. I am not sure if this author is an amateur or not, but when a book has not undergone an editing process, I expect errors here and there, but this one was near flawless. That is difficult to do, whether it be a professional writer or someone who has only been writing a month. A lot of times, when I see a story that discusses teenagers, it gets pretty fowl out and has a lot of things that are very inappropriate for the age range. This novel was appropriate and real. There is mild swearing, but that is normal for teenagers. There are sexualv references but no details, and once again, it remained appropriate. You can tell the author has a love for this book and a passion for their art. I hope that never fades and that they can continue sharing their passion with readers everywhere. "

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When There's Hail

"A sweet, deeply engrossing novel with great storyline and amazing writing style. A page-turner!πŸ‘πŸ‘"

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I Love It❀️

"Thank you for creating such a unique masterpiece. It was indeed a beautiful piece. I am so glad I found your book. ❀️"

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When there's hail

"Honestly a great read and I highly recommend it or saving it for your next book! I looked forward to every update notification πŸ₯° I count you lucky as the story is complete 😝 I'll be honest, I'll read the book to give it a chance but I tend to not be pulled into teen/young adult story lines; typically the story is about school, ridiculous drama, over the top characters with no depth & usually extremely detailed about the environment - like every action someone did, article of clothing (color, style), what someone was eating to how much they ate but nothing that adds to the story. *Not the case here* Great & unique story line βœ… Wonderful in depth characters with personality βœ… Humor that'll have you laughing & rooting them on πŸ˜βœ… Relatable plot/character actions βœ… Binge reading βœ… So be sure to check it out & I personally look forward to other works this author has in store β€οΈπŸ‘πŸ‘ kudos! Job well done 😁 "

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When there’s Hail

"It’s riveting, can’t put it down."

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Page turner

"As I aimlessly searched for a story to read, I saw this book and I am so GLAD!!! It is written so well, im almost like how am I able to read this good quality for free🫣"

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I love it so far

"I love it so far "

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