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I'm hoooooked , left right & center.

"I love this book"

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I love it one among my favorite book

"I love the plot and the characters I dislike how Jake doesn't understand her sister I love the book entirely and I recommend for the one who love the twist "

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Pain and pleasure

"Can't put it down. The master piece. Love ❤️ 😍 💖 ❣️ 💕 💘 ❤️ 😍 it. Thanks so much for sharing your work with me. When is the next part out? "

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Unexpected

"The ending was totally unexpected. I absolutely adored the book I am so anxious for the second one. I am so impressed. I loved the long chapters, the intesity and the suspense that you brought. I love how some of the chapter were so basic and showed normal moments of the human life, when it is super boring. It made it so much more realistic and I loved that. There were a few spelling and grammer mistakes throughout but that is to be expected when writing such long chapters. I do love how the long chapters kept me hooked and made me love the characters so much, they mostly all got their chance to shine. We got such a good description and a view of the characters personality in the long chapter. I do feel that gets lost when there are shorter chapters. Would have liked to see more of Ara's siblings but hopefully in the next book we get to hear about them a bit more and learn a bit more about them. This was an amazing book would totally recmmend. I am so excited for the next one."

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Loved it

"The story had romance , action and drama. Just loved it. Thanks for the lovely book."

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Pain and pressure

"Please !!! You must hurry up and finish book two!!! I'm loving everything about your character's. Will Arabella find out she's pregnant with the idea of keeping it from Adrian ,just to hurt him because he hurt her,or just because she actually found out what he was truly!!!"

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Please complete this story

"I could not put this down. This is amazing I truly enjoy your talent of story telling."

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Pain and pleasure

"Can’t wait for Vol 2. "

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Love, love

"The beginning of the book keeps you engaged and entertained along the way. Currently, I believe we’re getting into the thick of the story. This spicy story will keep you coming back for more 👀 "

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Deeply In Love

"I love this book so much!I would recommend it to everyone,it’s a great book "

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Amazing book

"I love everything about this book. "

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Captivating!

"I cannot put down my phone in reading this novel! The plot, setting, characters, and sequence of events were put together geniusly! "

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Pain n pleasure

"Love this book.. would recommend this to my doter"

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Very fucking good

"Amazing plot, good romance, hot dom/sub scenes. Pretty well written with very few errors. Only criticism is some parts need more descriptive writing, can be a little hard to visualise some places and people! But fantastic read highly recommend "

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pain and pleasure

"I cant put this down. What a captivating story line. Your characters are detailed and multifacited. What an amazing story. "

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Awesome

"This is great. I loved every chapter some of them even broke me into tears but I loved it. But the updates are slow, waiting for the next chapter .."

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Pain and Pleasure

"Ooh I can't wait "

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Jennydue

"Author please upload another one!!!!!excellent everything,grammar,writing.just love it.keep it up.and thank you for an awesome read"

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Really good read

"This story gets better and better, yes I think Adrian needs another chance just like Arabella. "

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Pleasure and pain

" I always love the rags to riches and unexpected love tales.. geegervy gives us a lot of character detail , humour, romance and a bit of spice to round it up Love this story but Hate waiting for next chapters"

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