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..Abandoned..

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Summary

"they say that the greatest pain is a heart break but how do you get a heartbreak without a heart the greatest pain is being abandoned by those whom you love and trust and I say it from experience" this is my first story so pardon my grammar

Genre
Romance,Other
Author
Lawal
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
3
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1


Athena's POV:


I felt a poke to my side then another and another......"WAKE THE FUCK UP ATHENA" wow a girl can't even get her beauty sleep,I slowly open my eyes to find my oh so innocent best friend Nova(Sykes) already prepares to go to hell.



"You do know you have school in like 15 minutes right".



Hearing that I rush to my closet picking out a white baggy shirt and black baggy leggings with my under wear

Oh where are my manners, my name is Athena Ferrari,"nerd" of the school but am actually the donna of the greek mafia which is the most powerful in the world and an assassin.I have a million dollar company called Dream corp which is the best fashion designing and jewelry company in the world.



I also own a cosmetics line ( Dream cosmetics) which is second best, the best is actually Kylie Cosmetics.. Kylie Jenner is Amazing...



owwwww



Nova as you might have guessed just hit a book on my head ok what a surprise not .



We are already on our way to school we are the nerds of the school while Brian our other best friend is the captain of the football team.



Me and Nova settle down in our seats at the front of the class and then mrs Briggs starts teaching and that my friends is when I zone out.........



Am in second period taking some notes down you know to complete the whole nerd act and then "ATHENA FERRARI PLEASE REPORT TO THE PRINCIPALS OFFICE".................wait thats me I dont recall doing anything wrong. My classmates were shocked cos you know, a nerd gettinf in trouble is not what you see everyday.



I make my way to the principals office, I greet miss cherry on getting there and she told me to head right in.I see Principal williams and he tells me to sit down but my assassin senses make me look around the room for danger and thats when i spot them my " parents " and older "brother" Gianni..



I dont think you know the part of the story which involves my birthgivers well let me tell you.............Once upon a time lived a man and a woman with 6 boys and then the woman was pregnant again but this time with twins two girls what a miracle not so when she gave birth they named the children Athena and Ariana but the father and mother loved Ariana more so they favoured her more and when she was 5 even her brothers loved Ariana more and Ariana was always jealous of her so she framed and accused Athena of hitting and beating her up so of course her family believed their golden child and sent Athena to an orpanage..........



During those years I have never felt so lonely they desserted me,they abandoned me,they left me broken but then I built myself into the person I am today. it was only when principal williams cleared his throat that I realised I had zoned out.



"Well Athena you will be going back to stay with your family because there was some misunderstanding causing you to be separated" Principal William said.I was fuming oh they think i would forget and we could live a happy family well I guess we could NOT .we would live together but I would make them regret it afterall KARMA IS A BITCH

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