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Amazing

"I loved this story"

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Great

"Great story "

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Beautiful

"Beautiful short story that gave me all of the feels because finally a man was straightforward with what and who he wanted, but also strong enough in himself to allow her to make her own decisions. And I hope Aaron gets everything he deserves plus more. Lu Lu girl, you are one hell of an author "

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Wonderful evening read

"Perfect sweet story! "

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Wonderful!!!

"OMG write more like this!!!!!"

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Xoxo

"Xoxo just love he comes to her rescue and both of them finding out they have the same feelings for each other. Just hoping in the next chapters she finally stands up to his brother and tells him to F off!! No girl deserves to be treated the way he has been treating her."

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Love this!!

"I love everything about. Everytime I stop reading I just want to keep reading. I did recommend this to my cousin to read. A great start to me getting back into reading stories and books again. "

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Loved it!!

"Common themes throughout this book, & sad to say I’ve been through some of it. It takes a strong person to break out of all that, & an even stronger person to help you break through it all. Love Adrian & Mina!"

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Before your eyes... not everything is as it seems. Sooner or later, you will face consequences for your actions.

"Aaron is a golden boy who never learned the consequences of his own actions. And hide a vile side of him that no one thought existed. Plus, he treated Mina, the girlfriend poorly like she meant nothing. What was Aaron's...he could do anything without consequences. Adrian, the older brother, is a real man for how he became Mina's knight in shining armor. To finally act on his true intentions of claiming her as his cause a guy in love with the one girl you can't live without does anything. And everything.... even if it means cutting off toxic people for a better life. I recommend reading this story....Lulu Waters has and always will deliver good books, in my opinion. She stays with the plot to keep each chapter interesting enough with twists. Turn of events. And so much more that you want to finish it. I loved reading the story, yet it was worth the hours put in to read it. "

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Before your eyes

"Loved it... A real novella!!!! Aaron got what was coming to him. So just like all the bad he did, he must OWN the consequences of his choices. Thank you Lulu 🥰🥰🥰"

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WOW! AMAZING READ!

"This book was initially surprising, then absolutely amazing! I've enjoyed reading every single word through every chapter! I'm so grateful, that, Lulu Waters has shared her talent with us! I finished this book in a few hours as it's that good! This book, BEFORE YOUR EYES, has the best ending, too 😍 Thank you, Lulu!"

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Before your eyes

"Another masterpiece by The LLULU WATERS this is the turd time I read this novel and I love the characters and the plot As for the romance 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 Adrian is a dream man ❤️❤️❤️❤️ Well done as usual❤️❤️🥰🥰"

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Amazing story

"Lulu has done it again! Making you fall in love with her characters from the start. The suspense and drama is to die for! "

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Great Novella

"Definitely one of my favourite Novella from Lulu. "

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