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Good story

"I enjoyed reading this story there where some grammer error and name switching but over all it was a good read. "

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Knights bar

"I just started to read this book. The author is good."

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Sebitain and Lilliana

"I like the story. It’s been tied together nicely. Now how about the kids stories"

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Sebastian Knight

"I enjoyed the storyline until the last few chapters. The reading was difficult bc I got confused about who was speaking. Also I don't like cliffhangers. "

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Sebastian knight

"I ❤️ ❤️ loved this. It was exciting a very good read. Please write more to finish book"

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Love this story

"Love this book so far, just like your other book. I can't wait to see what happens next "

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Nice story

"It was a really good story, the plot was interesting, and the ending suspenseful. "

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Sebastian Knight

"Loving the story "

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Sebasyian knight

"There are ti many mistakes, lily is sonia, sebastian is dominic, jack y sam,diego is william, you get mistaken with her or his, etc, you sould revue the book, i liked what i have read"

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Wonderful 😊

"There was nothing I disliked. Everything was wonderful 😊 I already shared this with a friend. Please do carry on with it. And do make more novels 😄😉"

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i love this

"pussy throbbing back arching heart racing novel. defo recommend "

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Nice read

"Very good book so far. The plot is okay i would love to see the reactions of her family. But it’s really good books so far and it’s spicy. "

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Mafia Romance

"Do we find out why Thomas wanted to kill her???? Why don’t they just kill Tamara?"

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Sebastian Knight

"The plot was good but the mid naming of characters, typing and incorrect grammar made it hard to read. "

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Romance novel

"The story line bounces around a lot. Its like it was written in haste. I do appreciate the characters persona. "

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Sébastien knight

"Reading the book is like reading the last book of 50 shades. I love the books and have all 3 of them"

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Sebastian Knight

"It read like a robot was describing everything. I couldnt finish reading it. It was very awkward and an unrealistic way to narrate."

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