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Short & sweet!

"It’s a lovely short story, well worth the read! "

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Short and sweet

"Thank you for your story. I enjoyed it very much. I don’t know if English is your first language as there was a few incorrect word usages of words that were phonetically the same. Also a lot of the same words repeated close together. I think if you pay more attention to this your writing will get even better."

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Bueno

"Muy buena historia exelente desde principio "

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Most gripping, enjoyable story indeed

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wonderful length

"i loved the novel, it has a perfect length. if longer, many things would start bothering me, but as a short story it is really perfect. one point deducted with the writing style because she hurt when she had her first time (first time sex shouldn't hurt)."

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It's incredible, I loved it so much

"It's incredible, I loved it so much, it's a very brilliant and wonderful story."

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Stalked by a vampire

"Enjoying the story😎👍🖤💜🖤🖤"

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Vampire Diaries

"Interesting story to read"

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5 Sterne

"Einfach 5 Sterne "

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Part two

"Loved this book can't wait for second one,we'll done thankyou"

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.......

"Sehr schöner Roman "

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Stalked by a Vampire

"Good book but I wish it was longer! I loved these characters and dialog but need more!"

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Stalked by a vampire

"Nice but I was hoping for some few episodes so as to really enlighten us on their sex and that marking "

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Female lead

"I really enjoyed reading this book, the author’s way of writing is fancy but not complicated and easy to understand. I also enjoyed the tension building all the way up to the end—but what annoyed me the most was how immature Odette can be despite her circumstances. I understand her feelings and struggles, but she should really be mindful. Nonetheless, I can’t help but laugh at the thought of her being annoying was planned by the author! The author did a great job, then. Love this "

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Sylvia

"Too short but the story is well written thank you "

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Good Read

"A lovely story, was easy enough to get into. The characters were there, pulls you in wanting more. If you are into vampires this is the book for you. The author should be proud."

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What a cute read

"Absolutely loved the characters and the storyline. Felt nice reading something different. Well written!"

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I loved it so much

"I was a bit skeptical at first but I ended up loving every bit of it. It was really heartwarming 🥹"

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Stalked by a vampire

"Good story, I enjoyed it"

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Very very good

"While Odette is extremely annoying and Cassius far too closed, I still find this a great read that I will enjoy again."

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