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Time travel gone nuts!

"Ok, this is a really different way to think of "Time Travel"! Not bad, just different. I liked the concept, but how did the villans learn to develop "the machine"? It's great the way the FBI and the Professor were able to capture the baddies in the future. It'll be interesting to see what Mr. Lockwood can come up with next."

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