Inkitt
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Best and beautiful

"I like this story. Free flowing. Interesting to read. "

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Kieron

"The plot was good. The characters were good. It was a cute love story. There were some grammatical errors like missing words and missing punctuation. It could have been a tad bit longer, but it probably ended where it should have. A loose end on what happened with Lola and the loan sharks, but, meh, it was interesting enough to keep me reading to the end."

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Kai

"Like it so far. Enjoy series looking forward to seeing where this goes.asdlove itffhhbg dffggdbbbnfrhivx dfhcebbrcv tgbyhnrnr"

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