What is your opinion?
So intrigued
"I loved the how the mystery kept growing and growing through this, and how we were clued into some things she didn’t know right away. I felt so sad for her because how how her mom is. I’m excited for her story to continue!! Hope to read the others soon. ^^ "
The beginning-education
"Hey Authorintrianing, I'm really glad to come across your amazing work. It's great to read in a calm mind. Your work's giving me sad and vulnerable vibes. I hope to read more of your works. It will be great if you could edit the mistakes sometime. Besides that the story's everything I could wish for. Thanks for the amazing story... "
The beginning: education
"Good start! Keeping me entertained and guessing what's going to happen next! "
love it.
"this story is realy cute, and a great story to read when your trying to relaxes.i was a little confused in the beginning but it , got less confusing as i when on, i think this had to do with the lack of backstory in the beginning would like to know why the dad left."
