Nice touches throughout

"At first, I thought the transitions were a bit abrupt, and that the narrator was a bit too nonchalant about the death of his wife and daughter. Upon finishing the story, I realized that the moment of the accident is when he snapped and so everything tied together nicely at the finish line. I like the way the journal entries stay matter-of-fact and casual in tone, even throughout the most difficult circumstances. There may have been a temptation to change the voice of the narrator to match the horrific events, and I'm glad you resisted that. It has much more impact the way you've written it. You'll probably get comparisons to Stephen King's Survivor Type, but that's pretty good company with which to be associated."