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Caloric

"I liked this story a lot, but thought the plot was a little over done. Phoenyx wakes up in a 6foot x3 foot cell and discovers that Lily is also being held prisoner by an unknown party. Soon Sabastian and Skylar join them. Knowing only that they will be executed in three days they must escape their prison or die . . . . ."

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Interesting read

"I like your writing style. It's also interesting the way the whole story plays out mainly in one location. I liked the flow of the story and the interactions between the characters."

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