Alpha Rick
Awesome story! Goes from nobody to somebody!!

"The storyline is awesome. It has just enough twists and turns to keep you guessing. I would suggest this book, but I would also say read it when you have extra time. You will not want to put it down once you start reading."

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Nora

63 chapters read

Alpha Rick

"The book is good, d chapters are well written"

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Anita

64 chapters read

Unputdownable

"I spent well into the early morning reading this and continued as soon as I woke up. It captures you from the very first page. I love the character development and the twist and turns. The story is well written. Highly recommended to anyone who enjoys a fated mates romance with kick ass main characters "

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Gallandro7

80 chapters read

Wrong genre but good book

"This was a good book, I enjoyed the characters, the background, the plotline was solid for a shifter meets his mate story. The only detraction was the way it was presented. I expected a modern day shifter story and what I read was shifter duck dynasty. Alarick becomes Ricky and it goes downhill from there for a bit. Twists and turns abound in this one then it ends up in a good place. You get your happy ending but the end doesn't come as expected, we get another 15-20 chapters after the apparent last battle. Which is fine, just strange. If you can ignore the part where your mind says..."What?" and just drive through it then the story picks up and flows nicely. Lots of interactions with the three primary alphas and their mates, it twists and turns a bit when others are brought up. The Luna in the first pack mentioned is a bit of a bitch, far too full of herself and insists on causing her own downfall. The attack on the heroes Luna is a bit weird too, in all the books I have read on shifters...none would allow a danger to stay alive once discovered, but apparently Ricky wants to see what happens and he does, almost to his detriment. This is a story that will have you saying, "OK, I know what's going to happen" and then turns on you. Then the feeling comes back, only to do a whirling dervish again and change things up. Not in a bad way, just a different spin, if you will. "

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Marie

64 chapters read

Nice story flow and easy to follow

"It's a nice story. Can be a little PG but it's ok. Some errors here and there but very negligible Nice read "

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Sharon

62 chapters read

Good story. Just small issues with tech writing.

"Issue with tech writing. Recommend story to anyone who loves paranormal stories "

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cdwiese

81 chapters read

Alpha Rick

"I absolutely LOVED this book! I was sad that it ended. "

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Lele

58 chapters read

The review

"It’s really a good novel keep up the good work I just didn’t like the detailed sex scene "

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boomermom53

66 chapters read

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"His/her mixup a little confusing. Like the action"

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anjadeleeuw

65 chapters read

Very nice novel

"Love the read, kove the characters. Looking forward to finish it. "

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Ellierw

78 chapters read

Great Read

"I absolutely loved reading this book. The storyline kept me enthralled throughout and sometimes anxious in the early chapters. Many times I couldn’t put it down. I was so enamoured with the characters and felt the female villain deserved all she got in the end. I felt saddened for Skylar losing his position and thought Brandon would have been much happier in his own territory …. I felt that the rogue king was going to turn out to be Olivia’s brother. As my first foray into this site I was totally overjoyed with my reading experience and Alph Rick as my first read, absolutely loved and enjoyed the read , thank you Mari"

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Alex

66 chapters read

Great writing and story

"Excellent story, Excellent writing. Amazing characters "

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Gabriele

38 chapters read

Awesome story

"I really liked the story. It is well put together. Hated that it came to an end, but what can I say, it‘s not mine to tell. I guess the fact that Leah and Noah are still alive, makes for continuity. That would be awesome. Just saying ……. I will be looking forward to read more of your stories. Thank you for this well put together novel. "

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Good book

"The book is well written besides some grammatical errors. They don’t deter too much except when they give a wrong name. Overall, I have enjoyed this book. "

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Dmoney45

60 chapters read

Really good book would be even better if errors were corrected

"I liked the concept. There were some twists (that I figured out but that's my thing😊) Loved the characters and I liked the procession of the story. If some of the errors were corrected it would be an easier read. There were some misspellings, grammar, punctuation, names switched I think and maybe once where I question the timing of incidents. But generally I enjoyed this book and am.looking forward to reading others by this author. From previous comments it seems this is not the first book in a series, so I will look into the others when I complete this one. Best wishes to the author. "

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Nancy

75 chapters read

Love this

"The storyline was sweet with the main characters and that the ex mate didn’t stay an A hole "

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Adefolasayo

81 chapters read

AWESOME !!!

"This story is really really good, and worth the length. There is no exaggeration of the characters, everything is within reasonable boundaries. There's a warning before any smut scene for those that don't fancy it, the ending wasn't rushed, the story has a lot of amazing surprise plot twist, and honestly there was a lot of talent, hard work and effort that went into this book. It's amazing. I recommend 1000%."

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jazyg10

57 chapters read

Great book!

"Absolutely loved this and would definitely recommend everyone read it! I loved that you didn’t stray too far away from the story like so many of these books do so I never got bored which was lovely! Lots of typos throughout but I could still understand what was being said!"

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Abisola

59 chapters read

Alpha Allarick

"Nice read, captivating. Feel good novel and author is good with words"

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Alpha Rick

"The book is a great read. Just a few typos. I love how everything is turning out. I am so glad Leah got rejected, so happySkylar changed and found a second chance, mate. Hope Brandon and Hunter find good mates. "

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