Perfect
i wish to create something perfect
if i can create one thing perfectly
no mistakes
no suggestions
no critiques
then i will become perfectly
valuable
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Little poems I write hoping to understand myself and the world around me. Some are sad, some are silly, and some are even romantic, but they're all a small part of me. Great for a quiet afternoon with some warm tea.
i wish to create something perfect
if i can create one thing perfectly
no mistakes
no suggestions
no critiques
then i will become perfectly
valuable
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Quenda: Overall a good story. Looks like it is in need of a good proof reader as it contradicts itself at times...but overall a good story.
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Catherineb83: Story good just would have liked her not to wear a mask
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Caspian Gray: Hello everyone!I'm Caspian Gray, a writer who focuses on deep, character-driven emotional dramas. I'm currently looking for trial readers for my new short drama, "Love of the Introvert."It's a story of...
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Shriya: It's a beautiful story with strong characters and a great story line. It's emotionally very engaging from start to finish. I enjoyed reading this.
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lblomme: I always love a story where good overcomes evil. The sad start, the growth, and ultimate strength of the main character was well done. The story never lagged and ultimately delivered a happy ending even for characters who were less than stellar. Well done!
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barb7604: Very good story, but glad you are writing a longer version. The end came way to quick without any of the previous drama
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