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Kya

"I didn't know what to expect when I started to read this, but it didn't go the way I thought. The author made me feel as if I stumbled upon secrets I'm not supposed to know and I was eating it up... I felt dirty, turned on and intrigued. It was great. Well written with pertinent information and no lengthy fillers. Awesome short story. Thank you for sharing your work. "

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Good reading

"Novel idea "

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Cannot remember

"Enjoy reading"

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Good plot, enjoyed the story-telling.

"I enjoyed the plot and story telling and liked the simple yet effective writing style. Could do with some edit though as there are spelling errors and other mistakes. "

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Hey

"I didn't get it at first but as the story went on... I find it very interesting "

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