What is your opinion?
Equinox
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Equinox : The Return to Earth
"Love the storyline. It’s like a movie. I couldn’t stop reading. Can’t wait to read the next book. "
Jason
"I like the way the writing is positive"
Equinox homecoming
"So far a good fast story. Would make a great saga with more character depth and plot detail."
Equinox: The return to Earth
"Well I have read all three books, Equinox: Beginnings, Equinox: The rise of Jason, and Equinox: The return to Earth. And I can not believe the way this story ended! Come on, Yusuf R Shaik, What are you doing! Don't leave us hanging . . . Where do I get Equinox: timeless????? NRF"
Jason King III
"Easy to read, I sped through the third part of this story. Not sure what to make of the Jason King character. "
Nondescript character's
"Ok the plot is fantastic, as in total fantasy, but the story began with a whimper, which is a no no, A story, book, novel must begin with a bang so to speak, to hook and get the reader's attention. my greatest concern is the stories focus on aristocratic forms of government, which are ultimately tyrannical in nature, and downright backward, why did the main character insist on being king both in alpha century and on earth, making both worlds a republic would have made the story relevant, and palatable, Now the story itself is written in the third person and sometimes a narrative which does not keep for a page turning product, the writer needs to describe character's in more detail, e.g how tall is the king, saying Eve is shorter than the king is neither here nor there, you need to be more graphic so the reader can form a mental picture of your characters. stories must, must, must, be written in the first person, unless it's a narrative, however a story was told so bravo is in order keep writing, you can only get better"
