Everything has a begin

"I really like the idea of this stories and am interested to find out how the story will continue. For my taste there was to much language used in teenage slang but that is just my personal preference. The only thing that bothered me while reading was that often two words were written together without a space wich made it hard to read and sopped me in my reading flow. Besides that I liked it and found the start interesting. I am curious to see how the story will continue. Best wishes, Luna "