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Climb up

Name: Climb up
Author: Andie

Andie 1 story

Poetry

Summary

This is my first attempt to a poem and I've just started to write down things from my heart.

Genre: Poetry,Other

Author: Andie

Status: 4yrs ago

Chapters: 1

Rating: n/a

Age Rating: 13+

Chapter 1

One touch can soothe

But so can it wound

Unless the soul

Is numb to it all

But how can it numb?

Only if it has clumb

The path so narrow and steep

And took all things from inside deep

All worries, all fears and all of the bad

Just to throw all away and get a helping hand

From the connection the soul so long craves

All souls need connection till they enter their graves

And maybe beyond as well, who can tell

Connection to light is always a well

A fountain of peace, acceptance and love

So tender it seems like a white feathered dove

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