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Felt From Within

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Summary

"Poetry doesn't have to rhyme, it just has to touch someone where hands couldn't" It's all felt from within -Mira Theewriter

Status
Complete
Chapters
6
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

As He Said

At the shore of the ocean


Watching the waves swaying in motion


This melancholic feeling


The breeze in my hair


And the sting of unwanted grief


Causing my eye to tear



"I'll be back" he says


But it turns to days


And weeks to months


So I sit and only pray


With my heart breaking


And my teeth chattering



White knuckles,anxiety creeping


The land's cold, the daylights dimming


But I have to wait a while longer


For he'll be back,as he said


-Mira Theewriter 🦋

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