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A Found Family In Rebellion

"Without getting into too many technical details and major spoilers- essentially what happens in this Sci-Fi story is that a kid's father is helping the rebellion of an oppressive regime, is killed while handing them something important, and the kid is taken in by a rebel family. It plays on the 'found family' trope which I do enjoy- and has action and characters that do breathe life into the work. Some scenes are told from multiple points of views, which helps color the narrative. Overall, I found it quite satisfying to read. There are some minor grammatical and spelling issues, but they are overall not too significant- the style is fine though it can get confusing at times, since the scenes are written from multiple POVs context generally comes in later. The story is slightly cliché with certain tropes, you'll figure them out when you read it, but not to the point where it feels derivative. Overall, I have little more than else to say that I enjoyed reading it. "

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Inked Angel

"It seems to be about a war of sorts of different kinds of peoples ?? And a kid? As the savior? The plot is kinda confusing…. Does the Angel keep the kid safe for what? Some kind of war?"

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Inked Angel

"It seems to be about a war of sorts of different kinds of peoples ?? And a kid? As the savior? The plot is kinda confusing…. Does the Angel keep the kid safe for what? Some kind of war?"

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  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation