Inkitt
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"I really like this story theme and style although some of the drama was really repetitive when it comes to the justice and stuff instead of a little different like a random stranger who likes to kill people or serial killer or something I'm not sure what I'm trying"

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Married her ex's father

"excellent work and writing. I was intuned with the entire story till the end. Wonderuflly done."

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good things

"so good"

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A very good book

"I am enjoying this book, most definitely a different style and loving it"

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Loved it!

"Great story. Loved the plot and details. Good job."

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Married Her EX's Father

"This is so good. Very suspenseful the entire way through way through♑♑♑♑♑♑♑"

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Raunchy Drama

"This is better than a soap opera!!!!!!"

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Married my exs father

"Loved the book wished it was longer."

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Love it

"I really like this story."

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So much potential

"There's a decent storyline, strong fmc and a progressive story that doesn't drag but it needs editing terribly. There are lots of grammatical errors, misspelled words, and misused words. It's distracting from the story and the kidnapping part doesn't make sense. How did they take her from her home with both her brother and husband and guards. I need that explained. And the plot, it's a bit sporadic but, it pulls you in. Despite the issues, so far, it's worth the read because there's healthy progression. It doesn't keep backtracking and the mfc doesn't put up with anyone's mess and I appreciate that. I've read too many novels that have a supposedly strong lead character, only for her to be weak. This isn't that and it's greatly appreciated. I finished it and wish there were more of the story. Really awesome main characters and good growth. Can't wait to see what's next from this author. "

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I like the book

"The book is nice I like thw writing skill The writee tried"

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It was good story. Would like to read more .

"Like the story and pace. Would have read more."

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