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"That was fascinating! I enjoy the characters and history on the Elvish. This could go somewhere! Make some more when you are able to! I love fantasy~"

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"I have to say I love the fact that is takes you on a journey through a extremely amazing fantasy world. I loved the creativity and imagination that was put into this. But there is one thing I have to say, you kinda jumped between timelines. Like the queen was a few cycles old and then she got even older in the next paragraph. There wasnt much detail with the wars going on but it was still fantastic"

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"To be honest, this story slightly confused me at first, but as I continued reading I understood what was being written. I love the writer's description and the overall plot. I would definitely like to see this be turned into a full story, as I think it would be great. The plot they have used opens up so many chances to write so much more, therefore it would a good book. I like how this story is original. I went in with an open mind as fantasy is not what typically read. Also, to add, I would have liked to see more descriptions of the characters and the setting. But overall, this story is great and I am excited to see what the author writes next. Kind regards, Bonita "

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