What is your opinion?
Give us more
"That was fascinating! I enjoy the characters and history on the Elvish. This could go somewhere! Make some more when you are able to! I love fantasy~"
Dear author
"I have to say I love the fact that is takes you on a journey through a extremely amazing fantasy world. I loved the creativity and imagination that was put into this. But there is one thing I have to say, you kinda jumped between timelines. Like the queen was a few cycles old and then she got even older in the next paragraph. There wasnt much detail with the wars going on but it was still fantastic"
Good writing!
"To be honest, this story slightly confused me at first, but as I continued reading I understood what was being written. I love the writer's description and the overall plot. I would definitely like to see this be turned into a full story, as I think it would be great. The plot they have used opens up so many chances to write so much more, therefore it would a good book. I like how this story is original. I went in with an open mind as fantasy is not what typically read. Also, to add, I would have liked to see more descriptions of the characters and the setting. But overall, this story is great and I am excited to see what the author writes next. Kind regards, Bonita "


