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Loved it!

"Loved the story, what a unique and creative story. I'd read more stories about some of the other characters especially 14 and Ruby, a follow up on Seth and 13 would be great too. A few grammar and spelling mistakes, but they don't distract from the story. Keep up the good work!"

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