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Girl in Pain

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Summary

"You are such a bitch! Why don't you just kill yourself, everyone would be happier if you died!" This is what Carmen Larove deals with on a daily basis by the people who were supposed to love her and care for her. First, she started out as an orphan as a newborn, then she gets adopted by a "loving" family at age 7. First couple weeks were amazing, she really fell in love with the "rich" lifestyle her new family loves to live. After a couple weeks, that is when her own personal hell started. Join Carmen on her journey of getting abused to finding love then finally knowing who she truly is!

Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Introduction and Characters

Hi, this is my very first story I have ever written, and I hope you guys really enjoy it! Just a little background about me, I am 21 years old, I have a daughter, and a loving husband. I have always wanted to write stories, but I never had the courage to do it, I am very happy I have finally found it to write this kick ass story!

Warnings - this story is a lesbian, polyamorous story, this book will have a lot of smut, cursing and violence. If this isn't what you are into then, please exit and find another story to read.

Please refrain from any negative comments, I write what I write and if you don't like it, again just leave :). I will not be writing any warnings before the chapter begins. I would gladly accept any positive feedback as well as grammar errors and such. I want this story to be the best it can be. Now we will be getting into characters of this story, they are not in any kind of order just wrote them down as I went. Use this as a guide through the book if you need. I really hope you enjoy this story,

Girl in Pain

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Carmen Larove - Main character, 17 years old, 5'8, platinum blonde hair, violet eyes, pale skin

Mr. Sean Hamilton - 40 years old, 6'2, brown short hair, brown eyes, tan skin

Mrs. Helen Hamilton - 32 years old, 5'6, blonde bob cut hair, blue eyes, tan skin

Rebecca Hamilton - 19 years old, 5'5, brown wavey waist length brown hair, brown eyes, tan skin

Brittney Hamilton - 17 years old, 5'4, blonde straight mid-length hair, blue eyes, tan skin, twin to Melody Hamilton

Melody Hamilton - 17 years old, 5'5, brown shoulder length wavey hair, blue eyes, tan skin, twin to Brittney Hamilton

Elizebeth Larove - 36 years old, 5'6, raven waist length hair, green eyes, fair skin

Bethany - 118 years old, 5'4, red waist length hair, red eyes, pale skin

Jane - 23 years old, 5'8, auburn shoulder length hair, green eyes, tan skin

Sandra Hamilton - 62 years old, 5'4, straight waist length brown/grey hair, auburn eyes, pale skin

Michael Hamilton - 65 years old, 6'5, short salt and pepper hair, brown eyes, tan skin

Claire Goodman - 39 years old, 5'3, long dirty blonde hair, blue eyes, fair skin

Jenny - 15 years old, 5'5, black mid-length hair, dark brown eyes, tan skin

Christi Moon - 16 years old, 5'6, light brown shoulder-length hair, auburn eyes, tan skin

Nina - 25 years old, 6'0, blue waist-length hair, blue eyes, dark tan skin


This is my story, I wrote this! So please do not try using my story as your own. I own this book!



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