"The Murklor"

"David, first congrats on your submission to inkitt...........I enjoyed your writing skills, story telling and getting to the end, where the Doctor and the Ranger were special guests of the Murklor. Only thing needed now were the timbers to make the cross's for the Doctor and 'Ranger, like the other two friends who your main character introduced to the Murklor..........and of course, the axe.............You might consider writing a novel someday soon, as your mind is well organized, and your writing is totally understood and flows well.....Great job David..............continue on............. william elliott kern"