What is your opinion?
I had a good laugh
"This story turned out to be the opposite of what I was expecting, but it was a short, comical ride. The characters are all quirky with their own unique traits, and the story definitely took a twist. I hope you keep writing! Thanks for the laugh. "
Harry Paine (sorry, not sure what I should write in here)
"This story had a fun touch of humour and, as it's a short story, the development was quite good. I enjoyed most of all Harry and Laura's opinions of each other, as it was the main question I've asked myself during the story. You also didn't suddenly have Harry be the best guy ever even after getting back together with Laura, which, I believe, is best that way. He is shown to not be the worst nor best guy. I've often seen terrible people be suddenly shifted into the most noble of people for the sake of plot, which was unrealistic and a result of a lack of effort. Here, on the other hand, nothing seemed forced. Stephanie helped them as she was a naturally helpful person, Harry and Laura spent 20 years together so being apart felt strange for both. Thank you, this story was most interesting."
