Sea. Storm. Silence.

Sea. Storm. Silence.

Thrashing waves and turbulent sea pounded against the stricken vessel . The waves and sea were like predator to the wrecked boat . As the wind howled , it made a shiver down your spine . The doomed souls were full of fear .

Waiting . Hunting . Watching .

The gloomy moon watched every over the venomous sea and waves . Defeated , the boat took one last gasp and plunged into the unforgiving sea , venomous sea with the thrashing waves above .

Then there was

Silence...

This was written by me at the age of ten (10) I am going to rewrite it here below to make things more clear and clean up some mistakes. though the edited version was edited my myself at 13 or 14. so don’t know if it is any more good ore worse. haha.

The edited version. haha

’Sea. Storm. Silence.

Thrashing waves and turbulent sea pounded against the stricken vessel. The waves and sea were like predators to the wrecked boat. As the wind howled, it made a shiver down the ship’s crews spines. The doomed souls were full of fear.

Waiting. Hunting. Watching.

The gloomy moon watched eerily over the venomous sea and waves. Defeated, the boat took one last gasp and plunged into the unforgiving sea. Venomous with the thrashing waves above.

Until the world froze na stood still.

Silence...′

let me know what you think and which one you prefer.

I’ve posted this as I’ve just found it on my wattpad account, (which I created years ago around 13 - 14 years old.) and found this posted as one of my stories. ( by found I mean that I forgot my password then today I miraculously was logged in again. and I only know as I was bored and so I wen track on the app and boom there it was my account loved back in and this there posted.)

It might be a sign or something and its just a fun little harmless short story. (very short. )

So I thought why not let's post about it again. But on here as I don’t use wattpad anymore.

I think for my 10 year old self that was pretty good if I do say so my self.

We had to at school write a small piece of work on a sea storm so that was mine picture and all. It was on the class wall the full year.

hope you appreciate my lovely drawing as well as my lovely short story. haha

BTW

I know it is shot but I don’t care I like it and are very proud of past me because I would not be able to do that now.

goodbye ! <3