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Nice work

"The story has a big potiental to get on a higher scale it has been a great day. The story is mysterious and adventurous the way the writer has described the backstory of diana and the name of characters were pretty unique. "

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Pillow Near Me

"Great, unique storytelling. I would recommend checking it out ✔️ ✅️ ❤️ "

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Has Potential!

"First of all, I wanna say that this story has a unique concept, about voices coming from the pillow. The said pillow is supposed to be a guy, and that's how the story went after the girl moved to US for a long term. I found the idea intriguing and I kept waiting to see if there will be more to the talking pillow, but until the chapter 7 so far, the writer still explains mostly about Diana life. I think this story has good potential, if the author will be more focused on retelling the story so every chapter will lead to the development of the story itself^^ Beside that, I think the author has a really good unique ideas and easy-to-follow narrative :)"

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