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His Revenge

"I enjoyed this novel. I wish the ending had been a little bit more interesting and romantic ."

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Nail biting !

"Loved it , complete entertainer as it had romance and suspense . Enjoyed it very much. Felt the ending was abrupt. Would love to read if there are few more chapters.Thanks !"

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His Revenge

"Great short thriller. You never know what people will do to take revenge. His sister wanted the good life To be beautiful like a model She ended up committing suicide. Her brothers revenge was to seek these models out and commit the ultimate crime"

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So Good

"I’m confused why she’s mad at her friend when she heard his conversation saying he let the man in her office and was giving the same man a key to her house. Is she Dumb or naïve? Sheesh. 🤦🏽‍♀️ On the edge of my seat. "

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Interesting

"Beginning from the title to the synopsis, the book cover, and the plot. It is not easy to write a book. interesting characters and detailed writing style. The story is pretty good. Keep it up! 👏👏👏👏"

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Interesting!

"It was a great read and I am curious about what will happen next! Maddox is already shaping up to be a great character. However, I think the scenes need to be worked out more patiently, but overall it was great! I hope Scarlett finds her love! All the best and great work!"

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Good work

"Interesting story so far though you used the word arraignment instead of arrangement when referring to Maddox's relationship with Francesca, was it? Other than that, the grammar was on point. Waiting for more. "

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Really? is that the end???

"Poor ending "

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The story's unfolding well!

"The character portrayals are so detailed with down to earth personalities! It was a pleasing experience :) You're grammar is perfect, paragraph structures are in sync and you're good to go! Unravelling the plot will come through with reworking. Just know you'll always have better methods at unveiling your plots with practice consistency :)) Otherwise, it's a job well done❤️"

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I think it will be really good 4/5

"So I think it will be really good later. But maybe the plot is happening too quickly? I mean they met the second time and then already kiss and then in the next chapter he stood there, they didn’t even talked that much and then BOOM. Something so big happened. But I will read it to the end and hope there will be more chapters because I want to know how it ends ❤️"

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Nice work 👍👏

"It’s really good - though not too exciting - but just ok for it’s description. Will recommend it to friends and others. I chose it as a result of random selection 🙂 but now I can’t wait to get to the end😄 The characters are really good 😊, the punctuations and paragraphic style is incredibly amazing 🤩 ❤️"

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