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Agt365

"The plot was suspenseful, the story itself was crazy, Chole and Lucius after kissing and having sex , she gets pregnant and never again so they embrace each other. No kissing or sex. To much turmoil for them to never show each other physically how they feel . The childish slamming the door and running away. If the incorporation of loving each other showed up and the childish behaviors were not part of it the story would have been good"

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