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Super

"Chiara made my day 😂. Great story! "

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Chaos in love.

"A delightful love story. Just enough drama without conflicts to keep the love flowing to readers. Very thoughtful of both characters feelings towards each other from early on with the Moon goddess help. Touching display of character emotions. 18+."

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Awesome!!!

"Storyline was awesome!!! Characters were amazing! Loved every page!!!"

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Stubborn mind

"This was a really cute story to read. I enjoyed it. "

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Stubborn mind

"Loved to read the book, very well written Nice plot "

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Strong

"She is very strong minded"

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Stubborn Mind

"Love the story "

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Stubbon Mind.

"I really liked it just didn't like the way it ended unless you going to make a 2nd book. I would give it 5 stars"

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Absolutely in love with story !!!

"Thank you for writing this ! This story has kept my attention which is hard to do sometimes lol . I'll be saving this one to my library! "

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My stubborn mate

"Interesting, I’m impressed . Congrats 🎊🍾👏👏"

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Can't wait

"I just definitely can not wait for the rest of this story!!!!"

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Chiara and James

"I love the different dialogues between Chiara and James"

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Felt like real

"I enjoyed the novel so much. The writer wrote to perfection!"

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Stubborn mind

"Good strory enjoyed reading it"

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Loved it!

"Very good story 👏 always looking forward to finding something a little different and this did not disappoint. It wasn't just a 123 done type of mating bond I loved how they actually fought at first then connected and made a good strong couple at the end."

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Stubborn mind

"Very good character development dealing with relationships and family emotions. Enjoyed reading and would recommend to others."

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Eva

"A couple of people made some bullying comments. You should give constructive criticism. The subject matter is good, but there are grammatical and logical errors. It's clearly one of the author's early works. The female character is only 18 years old, a teenager. It's normal that her definition and thoughts of love are immature. The marital bond is handled differently in each book, and this one was no different. The only thing I didn't like was James being a bit despotic. The book would be better if it were improved."

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Decent

"The story was decent but a little predictable. The main female lead wasn't the most lovable character. The vibe I received off her was more indecisive than of stubborn."

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Princess

"Glad to read about a fighting princess"

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Needs a lot of editing but nice story overall

"The story was great to start with but kind of fizzled out. The grammar was terrible. I would suggest putting it through an editing software or at least getting somebody else to check for grammatical errors."

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