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Broken

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Summary

Gwen has been trapped in Dal’s stronghold since she was 5. When she escapes, she ends up in BreakPoint. Another stronghold but it’s so different and foreign to her. When she meets Noah, her feelings are out of check and surprise her every time. Gwen is so used to keeping her feelings private and never showing emotion. But can Noah get her to open up and share about her past tragedies? Can he win over her heart and get her to trust him?

Genre
Romance
Author
Evelyn
Status
4yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1

Chapter 1


Gwen


I don’t know how long I’ve been here. Probably too long. If Dal’s whips don’t kill me, hunger will. I need to get out of here. I’ve had enough.

I’ve been in Dal’s stronghold since I was 5. Since then I’ve been trained relentlessly, shaping me into Dal’s perfect picture of a servant. Doing all her dirty work. She puts me on missions so often. The other girls here pity me and envy me at the same time. And I hate both. I don’t need your pity. And how could you envy me when I get a whipping session every time I step out of line, even if it’s such a small mistake?

Dal is beautiful beyond imagination. She has shiny black hair, sparkling eyes, and skin white as snow. You’d think with 18 years of training I’d have the guts to escape this hell, but no. I am still here, training and molding myself to Dal’s satisfaction.

But tomorrow’s the day. I’ve made myself an irreproachable plan. I’m going to get out of here for good.

Dal whips me over and over, creating a sick sound. “I hope this teaches you a lesson, b*tch.” She snarls. “You’ve never failed a mission before. What changed?” Whip! Again and again she cracks the whip. “They boarded the boat and left before I could get there! What did you want me to do? Jump in the ocean and swim?” I exclaim. Dal hisses. Sh*t. “That’s another session for you.”

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