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nice explanation

"Hey! The tension between Gemma and Joseph feels very raw and personal, have you thought about how this dynamic might resonate with readers if you expanded the story into a longer ebook?"

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"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer. "

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"MUSHROOM Mind"

"Steph..........., interesting and well written. cudo's.........one suggestion if I may. Work a bit on the sentence structure and Grammar...........your writing style flows well, and the format you have created helps the reader stay with the story, and the poetry. william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 Dead or Alive.........please review.. abstract point of view regarding life and death...........................thanks"

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