What is your opinion?
So poetic
"The novel's beautiful prose, filled with wondrous details, is a marvel to behold. It is truly a work of literary fiction that will leave readers in awe. Highly recommended! The author weaves a tale of imagination, excitement, and beauty."
Great!
"I love this story so far. I do feel like you have to fix the paragraphs and just give it some spacing. Some people like me, prefer to read with paragraphs that are spaced, but other than that I would give this story a 10/10. "
Great job!
"I think you do a great job at characterization, and creating tension. You have made to characters I find enjoyable, and created a vivid world with great descriptions. So far I am really interested in this story, and I think there is a lot of talent. My only feedback I would recommend fixing, is the paragraphs. When writing a book, you can be far more lenient with your decisions and grammar. Paragraphs can be a single sentence, or ten. You have more power to decide how you want your story to look. I would break these down far smaller. But otherwise, I’m excited to read more!"
